Peer Revision

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We haven't gotten to do a peer revision yet in ENG 101, but here are some of the aspects of the process I look forward too.
 In past peer revisions I haven't been required to ask specifics questions about my work for my peer to look into, I'm looking forward to getting to do that and seeing how it helps my essay. Of course in any other paper I've done I've read it out loud so i know that helps in finding mistakes one might overlook when reading the paper in their mind. I hope to get a partner who will give me good, helpful feedback rather than a partner who Isn't really engaged in the process. Overall i think the peer revision guide we'll be following is going to really help in making my paper the best it can be.

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