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I think this essay was much harder than the first one. While i was interested in my topic just as much as i was with my first one i think this one was harder for me to get my point across. The citations also made this essay more difficult than the other one. Figuring out the works cited page was time consuming and tedious so i think that has had a big effect on how i viewed writing this paper. On the "I Belive" essay we were able to write in 1st person which i enjoyed, it made me feel like i could connect with the reader on a personal level. However, with this illustration essay its much more formal, i feel less connected with the reader and the essay itself because naturally i write in first person than im having to change it to third.

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