I think this essay was much harder than the first one. While i was interested in my topic just as much as i was with my first one i think this one was harder for me to get my point across. The citations also made this essay more difficult than the other one. Figuring out the works cited page was time consuming and tedious so i think that has had a big effect on how i viewed writing this paper. On the "I Belive" essay we were able to write in 1st person which i enjoyed, it made me feel like i could connect with the reader on a personal level. However, with this illustration essay its much more formal, i feel less connected with the reader and the essay itself because naturally i write in first person than im having to change it to third.
college student struggles
"College students often struggle to balance school work with demands of their everyday life". I agree with the above statement. College students often have more than just school work to focus on outside of class. Some students are active participants in extracurricular activities such as sports, clubs, and sororities or may have an important role outside of school such as being a parent or caregiver. Students may also be active in their community doing volunteer work or working a job. College courses are more demanding than previous high school classes so some students may be struggling with class work then when they get home have a hard time managing their study time. College gives students a lot more freedom than high school so students have to learn time management skills and study skills.
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